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Title: The Sky Was Good For Flying
Author: Doyle
Characters: Six, Peri
Rating: G
Notes: This is set after Mindwarp but doesn’t follow the continuity of the books and comics that feature Peri after she left the Doctor (not even the rather brilliant bit about her returning to Earth and Yrcanos becoming a professional wrestler, sadly). There’s a passing reference to the audio The Reaping but it’s not necessary to have heard it.
Summary: The Doctor trespasses in a royal garden and meets someone he didn’t expect to ever see again.


There was a discreet little plaque mounted at head height in the hedge. ‘This is the private garden of the Royal Family,’ it said. ‘If you have become separated from your tour group, please follow the signs to the exit.’ It pointed to a series of even smaller, even more discreet arrows, all of them carefully placed where they wouldn’t jar on the eye of anyone looking over the banks of flowers. The Doctor took a moment to appreciate the thought that had gone into designing this landscape and then cheerfully set off in the opposite direction, reasoning that the directive could hardly apply to him. He’d only been with the tour group for ten minutes, before that guide had lost his temper. You would think he would have been glad, grateful even, to be put right on a few of his more laughably wrong misconceptions about horticulture and this planet’s history but there was no pleasing some people.

He passed through an orchard, pausing to pluck a fleshy crimson fruit from a low branch. The sign in this garden was bigger, and more insistent. ‘Trespassers will be prosecuted,’ it said, the last word written in marker; someone had scribbled out ‘decapitated’. ‘Eating fruit from this orchard is STRICTLY PROHIBITED’.

“Well, I can see why,” the Doctor told the notice, taking another juicy bite. “This is delicious. If this was my garden I certainly wouldn’t want everyone wandering in and eating these.” He dropped the core in his pocket and wiped his sticky fingers on a handkerchief. “Where to now?”

There was a large greenhouse to his right, but the carnivorous plant warnings on the door were less than enticing, especially when he cupped his hands to the window and saw the inhabitants leaning in his direction, as if scenting fresh meat even through the glass. He veered left instead, through a gate in the hedge and out onto a wide lawn. There were more flowerbeds here, dozens of them arcing in a spiral pattern around the paths, and bushes overhung with white and blue blossoms. There was also, to the Doctor’s annoyance, a man in overalls pushing a rake back and forth across one of the beds.

“Oi!”

The Doctor clasped his hands behind his back and developed a sudden and all-consuming interest in the nearest bush.

“Oi, you! In the coat!”

“I’m sorry, are you addressing me?” the Doctor said with what he considered to be infinite dignity.

“You can’t be in here!”

He looked down at himself in a pantomime of huge astonishment at finding that he was, in fact, in here. “I think you’ll find that I can. Whether I may be here, on the other hand...”

The gardener gripped his rake. “Look, pal, this is the Queen’s private garden, all right? Anybody nosing around in here can get...” His shoulders sagged. “Get politely escorted to the front gate and told not to do it again.”

“Not decapitated?”

“Not since the old days,” he sighed. “The Queen we had when I was a nipper, now she knew a thing or two about keeping people out of a garden. None of this guided tours for aliens nonsense. Heads on spikes all the way round perimeter in fruit-bearing season. Brings a tear to my eye to think of it. Happy days.”

“Yes, well, can we just take it as a given that you’re not going to be chopping off my head and I’ll escort myself back to the front gate?”

Oh, I’m not saying she doesn’t know how to run the place – we’ve three times the land we used to and there’s no more burning the orchards for sacrifices, oh no - but this messing around and making new species, it ain’t natural if you ask me. Which nobody does.”

“What a shame. I should write a letter to someone if I were you.”

Rant spent, the gardener seemed to rouse himself. “Here, it’s gone noon. she’ll be along in a minute. She won’t be pleased to find you tramping your great feet all over her downgrass. Sling your hook.”

The Doctor was quite ready to expound at length on the right of the common man to go where he liked, the idea that a beautiful garden became pointless if there was nobody to look at it, and that his feet were exactly the right size, thank you very much, when a woman in overalls came through the gate at the far side of the lawn. Another worker, he assumed, until the gardener whipped off his hat and genuflected before scuttling back to his raking. The infamous Queen, then, dressed down for a day in the garden.

He didn’t recognise her at all until she was quite close. Even then, she had to speak first.

“All these years,” she said, her voice shaking a little, despite the bright smile, “and not even a ‘hi, how are you?’”

She’d reached out her hand. After a slow moment, he gripped it tight, ignoring the scandalised sound from the gardener. “Peri,” he said.

**

“Didn’t know me, did you?” Peri gave him a rueful sidelong glance. “Not that I’m surprised. I mean, it’s been close to thirty years for me.”

He’d never been very good at judging human ages. The woman walking beside him would be in her fifties now. She didn’t look any different to him than she had at eighteen, twenty-one.

“It took a moment,” he admitted. “Only because I didn’t expect to see you here. I thought Yrcanos was – “ He cast his mind back to the last time he’d seen Peri. Too many mad Kings and warlords, that was the problem. After a while they all blended together. “King of the Krontep, wasn’t it? Conqueror of some empire, Lord of something he possibly made up. I’m sure he never mentioned Lapparus.”

“King of the Krontep, Lord of the Vingten, Conqueror of the Tonkonp Empire, Emperor of the Trafken System, God-King Incarnate of the Seven Blessed Moons of Sernax, and seven or eight thousand other titles. The wedding was six weeks of feasts, carousing and me reciting his family history from memory. Every girl’s dream.”

He would have said, “I’m sorry to have missed your star performance,” but he couldn’t summon an appropriate level of sarcasm. He really was sorry he hadn’t been there.

“Anyway, one of his uncles was the king of Lapparus, and with no kids Yrcanos was next in line. When he died we took a trip out to see the place.” She lifted a creeper from one of the trees flanking the path and trailed it through her fingers. “Which was the point when I realised the Queen had had a garden the size of Kansas, and it could be an amazing place if somebody could kill the weeds, plant some real flowers, lose the severed heads.”

“A very dedicated, very impassioned somebody.”

She shrugged, smiling at the compliment. “What else was I going to do? Sit in the castle on Krontep and learn tapestry? Yrcanos thought I’d gone crazy – no, crazier, he already thought I was nuts for not wanting to ride into battle with him – till he got the idea that breeding plant species was something to do with sex. Then he went all out for the idea. Even gave me the cash to hire my staff and set up a botanical research college. I never did get to take that botany degree, remember?”

There was nothing in her voice to suggest she regretted the loss of the life she might have had on Earth, if she hadn’t crossed paths with Turlough and ended up on the TARDIS, if she’d decided to go home instead of travelling. He’d told her the bare details of being taken out of time by his people, and if she’d wondered why he hadn’t come back for her, she hadn’t asked. It left him off-balance, this lack of anger on her part.

“I was surprised,” he said carefully, “when I was told you’d married King Yrcanos.”

You were surprised? You should’ve seen my face when he proposed. Or his face when I said yes.” She nudged his arm. “Hey, if you knew I married him, you could’ve looked up the date of the wedding. We had a castle full of Yrcanos’s loud, arguing relatives, it would’ve been nice to have even one person there for me. Careful, that plant’s dangerous.”

“Peri.” He sighed and stopped moving, though he made sure he was out of reach of the innocuous looking bud she’d pointed to. “The Time Lords showed me your death. Later they said it hadn’t been true, and for years afterwards I’d think ‘I’ll go back to Thoros Beta. I’ll find out what really happened to Peri.’ And every time I’d invent some excuse, some urgent thing to be done, because I was so afraid that I’d find out they were telling the truth the first time.”

“So you just never came looking.”

“I’m sorry, Peri.” He’d needed to say it for years, but had to address it to her back – she’d turned away from him, moved to where the path ended, at a row of trees.

“Come over here a minute,” she said.

He hadn’t realised the path they’d been walking was on an incline. The hill was gentle and the lines of flowers had been designed to trick the eye. Beyond the trees, the land curved into an immense green bowl of a valley. From here the Doctor could see the white building that must be Peri’s college, greenhouses, hedge mazes, dark patches of forests. And flowers. Millions of them, in every colour he’d ever seen.

“My favourite place,” Peri said.

“It’s beautiful.

“Even if you’d come back for me,” she said, “I never would’ve gone back to my own time. My mom and dad are dead. What was I ever gonna do on Earth? At least here I made something. Maybe it’ll only last a couple years, but...”

“Oh, far more than that. This planet is revered, you know,” the Doctor said. “It’s renowned. Or it will be, one day. A thousand years from now Lapparus is one of the foremost centres for botanical science in this part of the galaxy. The great forest worlds – Gharthan, Cheem, even the Eye of Orion – parts of them came from seedlings grown here. I never dreamed I knew the architect.”

She smiled at him, a fierce pride and a love of this place she’d made shining in her. Lapparus’s Queen. Almost all of the guilt he’d been carrying since Thoros Beta ebbed away.

The last shred of it, though, made him ask: “But still, Yrcanos?”

Peri laughed at him, wrapping her arm around his middle in a hug that caught him pleasantly off-guard. “Yeah, attaching myself to this really loud, bossy, forceful, kind of arrogant guy? Who saw that one coming?”

on 2008-01-12 10:57 pm (UTC)
ext_3537: Riff Raff from the Catillac Cats (Default)
Posted by [identity profile] valentinite.livejournal.com
Oh, this was lovely. I've never been quite able to reconcile myself to the end of Mindwarp in my head, but this works. Makes it a happy ending, without having to bend over backwards.

on 2008-01-12 11:00 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] doyle_sb4.livejournal.com
Yeah, Peri tops my list of "companions who got absolutely screwed over" so I really wanted to make things work out for her. Glad you liked it!

on 2008-01-12 11:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] randomalia.livejournal.com
This makes me feel so much better about the whole Six/Peri ending in the show. It's lovely and funny and inventive, like all your stories.

on 2008-01-12 11:54 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] paratti.livejournal.com
Thank you for that. I misted up. I hadn't realised how much I needed a better end for Peri and you gave it to me.

on 2008-01-13 12:16 am (UTC)
settiai: (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] settiai
Oh, this is absolutely brilliant. ^.^

on 2008-01-13 01:07 am (UTC)
gwynnega: (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] gwynnega
Aww, that's lovely. I especially like the last lines!

on 2008-01-13 01:11 am (UTC)
scarfman: (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] scarfman

Books and comics that feature Peri after she left the Doctor, Gracie?

I liked this. Peri's one of my favorites, and I laughed so hard at the end that I had to explain to my wife. Though recently it occurs to me that whether we believe she died on Thorus Beta, or married on Krontep, we're believing either the Valeyard or the Master, and do we really want to do either?

on 2008-01-13 01:17 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] doyle_sb4.livejournal.com
Books and comics that feature Peri after she left the Doctor, Gracie?

She's in one of the NAs - I haven't read it, so I'm going on hearsay and Wikipedia here. From Wiki:

In the Marvel Comics graphic novel The Age of Chaos, written by Colin Baker, Peri lives out her life on Krontep as Yrcanos's Queen and has at least three grandchildren, who are principal characters in the story.

The Virgin New Adventures novel Bad Therapy by Matthew Jones reveals that, although becoming Yrcanos's Queen, Peri blames the Doctor for abandoning her. In the novel, the Seventh Doctor makes peace with Peri and returns her to late-20th Century Earth.


And yeah, Peri's exit is never really resolved on TV - maybe she dies and the Master is lying for larks, maybe the Master's telling the truth for... um... some reason and she marries Brian Blessed, or maybe they're both lying.

on 2008-01-13 09:42 am (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] scarfman

Huh. I don't think I knew Peri'd appeared in an NA. Thanks for relaying the information.

But you can hardly be faulted for failure of compliance with contradictory tie-in continuity. (Hell, the screen source is contradictory.)

on 2008-01-13 02:36 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mpoetess.livejournal.com
Aww. *squish* Peri really did get screwed in canon, and yet I could never handle the written materials that had her bitter and angry, because it doesn't feel like her. I enjoyed this story immensely.

on 2008-01-13 12:22 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] miss-s-b.livejournal.com
YAY! This are my new canon, innit.

on 2008-01-13 02:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] finmagik.livejournal.com
I liked this, it was rather good.

on 2008-01-13 03:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] bibliophile1887.livejournal.com
Oh, this was so very sweet and lovely. YAY!

on 2008-01-13 03:47 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] eve11
Oh, this was so sweet :) I love Peri's administrative changes at the garden, and I just adored the conversation with her and the Doctor. We rarely see Six being gentle, or so sincere without being bombastic-- but you pulled it off here. I love that Peri became the founder of the forests of Cheem! And the end was just perfect. My eyes misted over even as I laughed :)

on 2008-01-13 04:07 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] amaresu
I got all misty eyed. Yay.

on 2008-01-13 04:42 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] biichan.livejournal.com
“Yeah, attaching myself to this really loud, bossy, forceful, kind of arrogant guy? Who saw that one coming?”

Perfect ending line! But then, this whole fic was lovely. Seeing Peri in her garden makes me happy inside.

on 2008-01-13 05:04 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] wishfulaces.livejournal.com
Oh, yay. Yay. Yay for Peri & Six, and yay for some kind of closure, and yay for the last line, and just yay.

on 2008-01-13 09:53 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] order_of_chaos
That was beautiful!

on 2008-01-16 10:46 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ghost2.livejournal.com
Finally, I understand why Peri married Yrcanos. ;)

on 2008-01-18 07:03 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] lizvogel.livejournal.com
That was great! And the ending was absolutely perfect.

This may just become part of my personal canon.

on 2008-01-24 06:02 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] bellabelball.livejournal.com
Oh, I love this story so very much! Definitely going into my personal canon. :)

on 2008-01-26 05:04 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] elliptic-eye.livejournal.com
Can't remember if I might've reviewed on Teaspoon already, but just to say—absolutely lovely. The first satisfying bit of post-Mindwarp Peri I've read, I think. The last line made the fic.

on 2008-01-28 02:07 am (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] infiniteviking
...

*puts in memories*

Awwwww. Peri in her stately fifties, surrounded by flowers. That's wonderful -- and the last line made me laugh.

on 2008-01-29 05:10 am (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] isweedan
That was beautiful <3

Very good!

on 2008-02-25 04:32 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] cakeordeath44.livejournal.com
Excellant! I wish I could write like that.

on 2008-05-07 01:45 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] autumnsdarling.livejournal.com
Oh lovely. Just lovely.

Peri was always one of my absolute favourite companions, and you have the Sixth Doctor's tone down perfectly. He's larger than life. Just as he should be.

Also, you've pitched it perfectly emotionally, which is a seriously impressive thing to manage considering the characters.

I love the satisfied, calm attitude Peri has, taking it all in her stride. It would have been very easy to over-write the relationship, and you've managed to get it just right.

Good job!

on 2008-05-07 01:48 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] doyle_sb4.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! I think this was my first try at writing either character, so I'm really glad it worked for you.

on 2009-01-12 08:41 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] random-nexus.livejournal.com
I liked this. Very much.
Nice ending you've given Peri here.
heh heh... yeah, who'd've seen THAT coming?
;p

on 2009-03-20 05:11 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] aralias.livejournal.com
this is lovely (trawling through old recs at [livejournal.com profile] crack_van). wonderful sixth doctor type narration, very funny and in character, and i love the brief gardener scene. it's great to see peri not only having a great and renowned garden, but also really making difference and being taken seriously by ycranos's people as well as just the king.

the best bit about it, though, is easily this: . “The Time Lords showed me your death. Later they said it hadn’t been true, and for years afterwards I’d think ‘I’ll go back to Thoros Beta. I’ll find out what really happened to Peri.’ And every time I’d invent some excuse, some urgent thing to be done, because I was so afraid that I’d find out they were telling the truth the first time.”

which is exactly the right reason, and perfectly in character with softer, repentant audio!six. as i said, lovely.

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