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[doyle]

Huh. Lots of anger and WTFery about this one on the old flist. So, I need to watch that again, but my immediate reaction: some stuff I loved (the Master's death scene, Martha's world mission) some stuff I hated (Dobby!Ten, Martha's mission turning out to be an evangelical quest, the Tinkerbell resolution), and overall I was disappointed since this season's been by far my favourite so far and I really wanted it to end brilliantly.

I loved what had happened with Martha right until the real plan got revealed. She got Ace's arc from the NAs! Only with 100% less Daleks! And Martha the legend, and the fragments of stories we get about her escaping from Japan and walking across America: I love that stuff. But the plan is stupid. I mean, the anti-Time Lord gun was stupid so I was glad that was a red herring (you don't need a special weapon to kill a Time Lord, unless the regeneration limit's gone. Even if it is, can they regenerate from having their head cut off?) but the plan is to harness the power of prayer. It's even called that in the episode. Right, my problems with that:

- why have this happen as he's about to launch his rockets? Okay, if he's broadcasting his countdown to the world it tells everyone when to start, but what if it hadn't worked? Couldn't they have done it a month earlier and given them time for a backup plan?

- this plan boils down to 'let's pray really hard and a man we've never seen in the sky will save us'. Which is somewhat dependent on the Doctor actually being there. Yet until she sees him on the screen in the Professor's house, Martha thinks he might be dead. It's been a year. The Master could have killed him at any time, and then what?

- speaking of the Master, how has he heard no inkling of the cult of the Doctor that Martha's been spreading across the world? The plan depends on everyone knowing they have to think about the Doctor at a particular time. Wasn't there a single person like the professor who'd trade that information for the safety of a family member?

- and on that, Martha gets this message worldwide, single-handed, within a year. In a post-apocalyptic world where you'd imagine travel and telecommunication would be difficult. That makes her the most efficient apostle of all time by some way.

- it's just... argh. Martha does all this heroic stuff, becomes a legend, spends a year not knowing if her family's alive or dead and going through who knows what, but she's convinced that she deserves no credit herself and the Doctor is God will save them all and - what has he done to earn that faith? From Martha, let alone from the people of Earth?

ETA: I think this is my problem with the whole episode. Because it's uncomfortably like those post-Lazarus Experiment fanfics where the Doctor has a big huffy tantrum about how Martha's NOT his plus one and how DARE she use a perfectly normal phrase that he used about Rose one time. It's making a character into a mouthpiece for the author even if it means making them wildly OOC or giving them knowledge they shouldn't have. It's projecting something we, the audience, know onto the characters. Yeah, we know the Doctor always saves the day. We've seen the episodes. Martha was doing the evangelical thing as far back as Gridlock, when the only thing she'd seen the Doctor do was get his blood sucked by a plasmavore. Why does she think the Doctor's pretty much a god? And why would everyone on Earth believe her?

- I really wish she'd been building an army. Everyone on Earth rising up against the Toclafane and the Master's rockets at the same moment. I wouldn't even have complained that it was a ripoff of Buffy's Graduation Day, because it would have been cool.

- "the one thing you can't do is stop them thinking". Except, he can. Last episode? Worldwide mind control? "I am the Master and you will obey me"? Sort of a major point of the character?

- unrelated, but one last thing that bothered me: it's great that Martha realises she's not second-best to Rose or anyone else. Would've been nice to have some reaction other than the Doctor standing in silence when she says this.

I did love the Master's death scene, and the Doctor's insane but tragic belief that he can Redeem Him With Love. Oh, if a good Time Lord comes back he's going to drive them mad with clinging. Romana would have to fake her own death to get away.

Martha's exit: made total sense, and the people having a good gloat about her being gone might want to wait till we get confirmation on whether she's actually left (moved to Torchwood, as I'm half suspecting). I knew she'd stay on Earth as soon as we realised the Jones' remembered what had happened (except for Leo, I assume) - she couldn't leave her family after that. Give her a year to pass her exams, for everything to go back to normal (for her to get together with hot Dr Tom?) and she can come back to the TARDIS.

Titanic? Which we know from End of the World the Doctor is on? CAN IT BE EIGHT TIEM NAO? (I know I'm in a minority, but I hope the Kylie rumour's true. That'd be fab. There's an announcement about the casting on Tuesday and I'm almost sure it'll be Kylie, though I have a tiny batshit shred of hope it's McGann.)

Oh, and it's not just me who wants Buffy crossover fic set during Martha's year-long quest, right...?

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[agilesreader.livejournal.com]

I agree with you. I really did not care for the resolution to this story. I have massive logic problems with his plan working. How could they even be sure there would be a countdown or a moment to think of the Doctor? I just see too many problems with it.