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doyleMore revising of the Book of Days.
First draft - 2960 words to get to exactly the same place in the plot as the 564 words of the second draft. Quite a lot of those 2396* extraneous words were exposition that's going to have to go back in somewhere, but it still says something about how long I can take to get to the point.
(* I had to work this out using a calculator. Two Maths A-Levels and three years of a Physics degree and I can't subtract in my head.)
Oh, did a small update to Ice Cream for Freaks. About 25 new recs - one Angelus/Spike/Dru, one ensemble, four Wes/Illyria, the rest Spangel.
First draft - 2960 words to get to exactly the same place in the plot as the 564 words of the second draft. Quite a lot of those 2396* extraneous words were exposition that's going to have to go back in somewhere, but it still says something about how long I can take to get to the point.
(* I had to work this out using a calculator. Two Maths A-Levels and three years of a Physics degree and I can't subtract in my head.)
Oh, did a small update to Ice Cream for Freaks. About 25 new recs - one Angelus/Spike/Dru, one ensemble, four Wes/Illyria, the rest Spangel.
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on 2004-05-18 03:21 pm (UTC)