Favourite fic bits

[doyle]

This is a meme from wesleysgirl: favourite bits from your own writing.

I'm talking about which sentences or paragraphs you read and think "Okay, look at how nice that is." The bits that make you feel like maybe you really do know what you're doing, after all.

My two favourites are both from fairly recent fics:

And there's just something about this guy; like somebody made an e.e.cummings poem person-shaped and dressed it in dadaism.
Aesthetic Form
(the first thing I ever wrote that made me think "hey, I actually like that a lot")

and

Who are you? I ask him, and this man's smile could kill. Could cure cancer. Could inspire cults.

Once upon a time, it did.
Snowflake

Comments

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

These are both lovely. Reading them made me smile hugely. :-)

[vylit.livejournal.com]

These are lovely.

[blackgarden.livejournal.com]

Who are you? I ask him, and this man's smile could kill. Could cure cancer. Could inspire cults.

Once upon a time, it did.

Gah, that's just gorgeous.

[gwynnega]

I like these a lot!