More flashfic stuff

[doyle]

I'm now at 900 words, and about halfway done. At this point I have a couple of options:
- do what connorbeast suggested and have the characters just meet in a bar, making it more cliched but dispensing with a couple of hundred words of setup
- do what Kevin suggested and "sacrifice the dialogue and characterisation for random porn" (or similar)
- or cut all the couply bits and just have the characters talk. Which kind of defeats the purpose, really.

Comments

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Don't know what to tell you. Mine's done, at 1021 words and I can cut 21 words easy. But they never got to the actual orgasms. I left them in mid-wank, pretty much. Poor boys.

On the other hand, the idea of sacrificing the characterization in favor of porn holds some attraction, since my characterization of the two characters in question is shaky at best.

/me contemplates porn, with as little talking as possible.

[gwynnega]

While I love dialogue and characterization, it's hard to argue with "random porn"! ;) (I think an icon with the words "random porn" on it would be nice, too!)

[miss-tress.livejournal.com]

Why can't I be a victim of random porn?

*pouts prettily*