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Drunken!Giles ficathon entry, which I thought was due on New Year’s Eve, argh. [livejournal.com profile] trkkr47, I know your first choice was Giles/Ethan, but that wasn’t working for me so I resorted to the second option…

Title: Too Much
Author: Doyle
Pairing: Giles/Willow
Rating: PG-13
Notes: For [livejournal.com profile] trkkr47 who wanted post-Chosen, Giles ranting, and Giles hitting on Willow, no over-the-top silliness or angst. There’s angst, I’m sorry, it crept in when I wasn’t looking.


It took a whole glass of wine, and most of a second one, before it began to register that Andrew had perhaps been a bit confused as to what mulled wine actually was, and that he’d somehow made it about ninety percent proof.

By the time Giles had put all this together, he was too pissed to care, and he sat down heavily on the stairs to finish his glass. The stairs were longer than he remembered. The carpet was softer, too, velvety under his hand. And there definitely wasn’t normally a girl sitting on the top step, although this didn’t surprise him very much. The party was overrun with girls. It was quite a relief to see someone else who wasn’t a Slayer and also, this was the important bit, wasn’t Andrew.

Willow waved, and bumped herself down a couple of stairs until she was sitting beside him. “Giles! I like your house. And your, this.” She waved her glass. The wine made an interesting splatter pattern on the carpet. “Your hot wine. Is also good.”

“You’re drunk,” he said severely. “That’s unlike you, Willow. I’m very, very…” There was a word for that. What was it? “Pleased?” he hazarded.

“Doesn’t sound right.” She swayed against him, propping her chin against his shoulder. “Disappointed?”

“Yes, that sounds more like the thing.” He toasted the air. “Well done, that man.”

“What man?”

He frowned. “What man? I didn’t see any men. Just women. Girls.”

“I know! And, y’know, I’m all ‘yay, huzzah for girls’ but there are so many and they’re all, they’re so… ooh, I really like this shirt, is it new?”

“No respect,” Giles said, oblivious. “No respect for me, for anyone with a bit more experience. They never listen, not that that’s anything new, you lot never listened either...”

“But we did it in a way that showed we cared,” she protested. “We never listened with love.”

It was probably the nicest thing anyone had ever said to Giles in his entire life, and he told her so. His arm had found its way across her shoulders and he was too comfortable to try moving it.

“Giles?”

“Hm?”

“I think I’m kind of drunk.”

“I’d tend to agree.”

She patted her face. “Is my nose red, like in cartoons?”

“Your hair is.” A strand had slipped free from the clasp, was hanging over her eye; he brushed it back. Her hair was very red, he thought, and her skin was very pale, and her eyes were very large and very green; surely it was only when she was drunk, or he was, that she became such a study in intensity. It would hurt to look at her otherwise.

Sober, his brain might have pointed out other superlatives, like the fact that she was very young and had a girlfriend who was somewhere in the building and very strong. Sober, he wouldn’t say, “Willow…” and angle his head and close the tiny distance between his mouth and hers, and he certainly wouldn’t do all of this in a hallway where anyone (Kennedy) might catch them.

Willow must have been less drunk than she’d let on. That, or she had good reflexes, because she kissed him back – reaching up to stroke the side of his face, and she tasted like the wine, exotic and warm – but then she was pulling away, standing, and Kennedy was approaching the bottom of the stairs.

“Hey. Been looking for you. Hi, Giles,” she added, an obvious afterthought. “Great party. C’mon, Will, I wanna dance.”

She glanced back at him, guilt already written all over her face.

“Go,” he said. “I’m fine. I could do with getting another drink.”

“Your glass is half full,” Kennedy pointed out.

He gave her a chilly smile. “Some would say it’s half empty.”

on 2004-12-28 10:12 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] swmbo.livejournal.com
ohhh!! I loved this and it's very... sweet and sad and just the right amount of drunkneness to make it seem natural.

Sober, his brain might have pointed out other superlatives, like the fact that she was very young and had a girlfriend who was somewhere in the building and very strong. Sober, he wouldn’t say, “Willow…” and angle his head and close the tiny distance between his mouth and hers, and he certainly wouldn’t do all of this in a hallway where anyone (Kennedy) might catch them

Hee. That's the best bit. But the last line made me tear up a little bit. Thank you!

on 2004-12-28 10:12 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] callmesandy.livejournal.com
I love those last two lines - and awwww, Willow, they never listened with love!

on 2004-12-28 10:14 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] lostgirlslair.livejournal.com
Oh, man! Nicely done and I absolutely loved, 'He gave her a chilly smile. “Some would say it’s half empty.”' Nice drunken Giles and Willow!

on 2004-12-28 10:16 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] thebratqueen.livejournal.com
That's some nice work, boys.

on 2004-12-28 10:16 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] dualbunny.livejournal.com
Looooved that last bit. I like your drunken people. :D

on 2004-12-28 10:21 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] helygen.livejournal.com
I hesitated before reading this as I'm kinda wary with Giles/Scooby fic since much of it reads like incest, but this is lovely and so believable. Very good characterisation, too, especially Willow :)

on 2004-12-28 10:23 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] gwynnega
Marvelous.

“You’re drunk,” he said severely. “That’s unlike you, Willow. I’m very, very…” There was a word for that. What was it? “Pleased?” he hazarded.

You do such a good job of capturing the drunken mindset, or lack thereof! And oh, the ending is so sweetly sad...

on 2004-12-28 10:38 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] headrush100.livejournal.com
Lovely! A very nice mix of the funny and the poignant. Great stuff. :-)

on 2004-12-28 11:27 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] livinglaurel.livejournal.com
Willow/Giles! Willow/Giles!

((reads))

Aww.

((reads more))

He gave her a chilly smile. “Some would say it’s half empty.”

Jeez BREAK my heart why don't you....Beautiful little sad Xmastime story.

((sniff))

on 2004-12-28 11:28 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pinkdormouse.livejournal.com
Here via [livejournal.com profile] gwynnega, and that was fun.

Gina

on 2004-12-28 11:35 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] magarettt.livejournal.com
Yeah-ahhh! Awesome. Love that last line.

on 2004-12-28 11:47 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] nwhepcat.livejournal.com
Oh, I loved this. Very natural and sweetly funny, and just that touch sad at the end. Lovely.

on 2004-12-28 11:49 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] annakovsky.livejournal.com
Oh, awesome! That last line hurts.

on 2004-12-29 12:00 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] willshenilshe.livejournal.com
This was so very beautiful. I always enjoy Giles/Willow, and you've captured a beautiful, bittersweet moment here. Many kudos to you for your writing.

on 2004-12-29 12:57 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] fannishnej.livejournal.com
This was a wonderful bittersweet story. Have you written other Willow/Giles stuff?

on 2004-12-29 01:41 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] viciouswishes.livejournal.com
I adore your drunken!Giles. Wonderfully sweet.

on 2004-12-29 02:49 am (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] wyrdkat.livejournal.com
love, love, love!

very nice to read on what has been a bit of a stressful day, thank you. :)

on 2004-12-29 03:48 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] orthoepy.livejournal.com
Very nice!

on 2004-12-29 03:58 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mrtwstedwhsprs.livejournal.com
Enjoyed it very much.

Absolutely wonderful last line, and a great hint that there's something still moving after the last line is done. Perfect last line. I think I'm quickly becoming a Giles/Willow fan since I wrote one, and I definately enjoyed reading this one.

Mr. Twisted Whispers (aka The Fiance)
@--'--,--

on 2004-12-29 01:40 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] tinpanalley.livejournal.com

Loved it. Very nice drunken angle and the last line was absolutely perfect!

on 2004-12-29 01:54 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] doyle_sb4.livejournal.com
Thanks! And I have a couple of other Giles/Willow bits:

Belonging (http://www.livejournal.com/users/doyle_sb4/167053.html) (after Chosen)
The Shape Of Your Heart (http://www.livejournal.com/users/doyle_sb4/259056.html) (Chosen)
Life As a Killer (http://www.livejournal.com/users/doyle_sb4/218630.html) (after Grave)

on 2004-12-29 02:38 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] fannishnej.livejournal.com
Thanks. I read and commented on all of them. I friended you, if you don't mind.

on 2004-12-29 07:34 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] stakebait.livejournal.com
The stairs were longer than he remembered. The carpet was softer, too, velvety under his hand. And there definitely wasn’t normally a girl sitting on the top step, although this didn’t surprise him very much. The party was overrun with girls. It was quite a relief to see someone else who wasn’t a Slayer and also, this was the important bit, wasn’t Andrew.

Hee! Best line ever. Well, that and the bit about not listening with love. Seriously, great job!

on 2004-12-29 10:02 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] flurblewig.livejournal.com
Wonderful! Bittersweet and lovely

on 2004-12-30 07:38 am (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] medelle.livejournal.com
That so cries sequel! :)

on 2004-12-30 01:45 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] doyle_sb4.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

on 2004-12-31 06:43 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] jedi-penguin.livejournal.com
Ooh! That's excellent! That final line is an absolute killer.

on 2005-01-04 04:51 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 47-trek-47.livejournal.com
Hee. Yet again, you get my request in a ficathon. :) Lucky me!

This was adorable! The last line is very powerful, and the angst was quality angst, so I'll let you get away with it ;)

btw, can I archive this and The Shape of Your Heart and Life As A Killer over at willowgiles.com? I've been seriously falling behind on the updatage over there (bad me), but these fics should really be there.

on 2005-01-04 07:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] doyle_sb4.livejournal.com
Thank you, and you're welcome to archive them :)

on 2007-09-11 12:00 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] shealynn88.livejournal.com
Oh, this is just...lovely! So incredibly THEM, I love both their voices, and Giles drunken thought processes are just hilarious and fun, and make me want to squish him. The last line is just, so unexpectedly and gorgeously poignant, and I just loved this like crazy. And I know I'm awfully late to the party and all, but I'm really glad it's still out here to enjoy. :)

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