doyle

First, my deepest apologies for taking over a month to give you feedback.

Second, GREAT STUFF!!! Absolutely hilarious.

He'd had some bitterly commiserating phone discussions with Principal Buckmeiler in Ohio about the constant extra demands on their time.

Priceless. Very Jane. And I always love references to the hellmouth in Cleveland.

"You! Tucker Wells."

The boy stopped, glancing uncertainly around. "That's my brother, sir, I'm Andrew, I'm a junior?"

YES!!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!

"I don't remember hiring you," he said.

"Nothing," he said decisively, "is going to eat me."

Both of those lines absolutely slayed me.

Excellent work. Snyder was spot on. Thanks so much.