What's up with author notes in the middle of the text?
I've seen this in quite a few fanfics I've read over the last couple of days. Stuff like, to give a made-up example:
'Spike and Buffy were slow-dancing to the song Iris
(A/N: I love that song it is soooo kewl!1!! lol'
Can you imagine if published authors did this?
'It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a large fortune must be in want of a wife. (A/N: My best friend says this is the best opening eva!!1!)'
'He drew a light breath and said lightly but softly: "my dear, I don't give a damn." (A/N:Sooooorrree to all who wanted a happy ending but this is what it had to be!!1!')'
ETA: since
paratti asked...
' "Oh Cathy! Oh, my life! How can I bear it?" was the first sentence he uttered, in a tone that did not seek to disguise his despair. (A/N: This is my first novel & is way better than my sisters writing!!! Pleeeze R&R!!)'